Visual Poetry

These are not ordered poems, just little odes or free verse. I tend to avoid rhyming and such~

About Dreams, because I can >D



About a hallucination I had for a few years that went away recently



Halloween shit

Reminds me of Tool-esque stuff.
I like the Scarecrow one, being ominous

I like the first the best though.

Treble wrote:Reminds me of Tool-esque stuff.
I like the Scarecrow one, being ominous

I like the first the best though.

Dawww thanks. ^^

The scarecrow one bugged me, I wanted four stanzas but couldnt get into it enough. It was meant for all audiences after all.

There's that friendship one in the other art x3 I forgot to post it.

I read them, but I'm mindless, so I can't give you specific critique...or can I? O_O

...Yeah, I can't. But I love the diction. All the words are just...cool. I'm not sure.

I stopped liking Mutter halfway through. Can't tell you why though, not sure myself. lol

Den wrote:I read them, but I'm mindless, so I can't give you specific critique...or can I? O_O

...Yeah, I can't. But I love the diction. All the words are just...cool. I'm not sure.

I stopped liking Mutter halfway through. Can't tell you why though, not sure myself. lol

It's because you're Holden, and Holden is void of "I care" xD

But thank you. I like concritiques too btw. It helps me see through the readers and I can judge their souls later c: